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Eszter Do Hong | Author's avatar

Wow, you're really a bloodthirsty editor of your own work! It's great to see how other authors work. Thanks for the glimpse!

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A.C. Cargill, All-Human Author's avatar

It was a totally new and very freeing experience for me. I approach reading my other writings much more relaxed now and with no hesitation to remove the gunk. Hee!

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Jessica Maison's avatar

Good timing! I am about to open an old WIP to do streamline some of the plot and cut out the excess. This was helpful!

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A.C. Cargill, All-Human Author's avatar

Hope it goes well, and enjoy the experience!

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Josh Tatter's avatar

I spent something like 4 or 5 years planning the below story in my head, but I could never actually get it out onto paper until I completely cut my planned intricate opening and just got straight to the point. After that, the story flowed out like it was nothing.

https://joshtatter.substack.com/p/fate-of-an-empire

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A.C. Cargill, All-Human Author's avatar

Ah, yes, a good opening. Right into the action!

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Wendy Parciak's avatar

I adore cutting. It is absolutely my favorite part of revision. And way easier than adding!

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A.C. Cargill, All-Human Author's avatar

Yes, indeed. I found the experience quite thrilling. And that was very unusual for me. Happy cutting!

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A.C. Cargill, All-Human Author's avatar

Not sure if you're referring to the longer version or the cut down version, but thanks anyway. So good to hear!

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