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The Man Behind the Screen's avatar

Beautiful. Heart wrenching, but incredibly beautiful. I'm reminded of my Grandmother and my great aunt Loretta, pleasantly so despite the lump this left in my throat. Lovely, lovely writing.

A.C. Cargill, All-Human Author's avatar

Thank you so very much. I got a lump in my throat writing it.

Emerald City Ghosts's avatar

I really liked the line about hope and the sun being behind the main character with only gray clouds before her. Very evocative!

A.C. Cargill, All-Human Author's avatar

Thanks. This was actually the story I was thinking of sending you for your ghost issue. I forgot it was on here.

Donna Warren's avatar

Wow! What a lovely story! It brought tears to my eyes.