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Joyce's avatar

Oh wow, that’s quite a story and an unexpected end. I kept wanting to scroll to the end like you do with a book, curious how it will end. Loved this mix of love, the eerie and mystery. Thanks, AC, this was a wonderful story 💙💫

A.C. Cargill, All-Human Author's avatar

Thanks much, Joyce. Not sure where Elias' life will go from here in part 3. Hmm....

Joyce's avatar

Can’t wait to read more!

A.C. Cargill, All-Human Author's avatar

Funny how a character like that can grow on the author.

Joyce's avatar

And take you where you never thought it would

Tony Dawson's avatar

Nicely done, A. C. (do the initials stand for anything, by the way?) A bit more like horny Thursday than Thorny Thursday, though.

A.C. Cargill, All-Human Author's avatar

ROFL!! Love it! Horny Thursday! Yeah, well Elias keeps trying. Not sure where his life will go from here. And yes, the initials stand for something. Hmmm... maybe Adverse Contrarian?

Tony Dawson's avatar

Do you mind if I insert one of my flash fiction stories?

A.C. Cargill, All-Human Author's avatar

Better to post on your own as a Note or on your 'Stack.

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Tony Dawson's avatar

I don't have a stack anymore because I couldn't get the hang of the way to set one up properly. I'm very old.

Jodie Beckford's avatar

Brilliant! What a great twist at the end! I really enjoyed this.