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Apr 18Liked by A.C. Cargill, Author

Oh wow, that’s quite a story and an unexpected end. I kept wanting to scroll to the end like you do with a book, curious how it will end. Loved this mix of love, the eerie and mystery. Thanks, AC, this was a wonderful story 💙💫

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Thanks much, Joyce. Not sure where Elias' life will go from here in part 3. Hmm....

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Apr 18Liked by A.C. Cargill, Author

Can’t wait to read more!

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Funny how a character like that can grow on the author.

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Apr 18Liked by A.C. Cargill, Author

And take you where you never thought it would

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So very true.

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Apr 18Liked by A.C. Cargill, Author

Nicely done, A. C. (do the initials stand for anything, by the way?) A bit more like horny Thursday than Thorny Thursday, though.

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ROFL!! Love it! Horny Thursday! Yeah, well Elias keeps trying. Not sure where his life will go from here. And yes, the initials stand for something. Hmmm... maybe Adverse Contrarian?

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Apr 18Liked by A.C. Cargill, Author

Do you mind if I insert one of my flash fiction stories?

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Better to post on your own as a Note or on your 'Stack.

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Apr 18Liked by A.C. Cargill, Author

I don't have a stack anymore because I couldn't get the hang of the way to set one up properly. I'm very old.

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Brilliant! What a great twist at the end! I really enjoyed this.

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