When you send a spy, be sure he’s good at subterfuge
Peter seems pretty brainwashed. I'm hoping he's found out and humiliated. Ha.
I should have included this link in the article. It tells a bit more about Peter. And I’ve drafted a book (~98k before final edits) about how he came to be what he is when he arrives in Hammil Valley. https://accargillauthor.substack.com/p/the-story-of-freelan-from-villain
Great writing! I liked how you handled the dialogue.
Thanks!
That’s what the WIP “The Journey of Peter Thorn” does. Poor guy is told lies for so long that seeing the truth is quite a shock.
Peter seems pretty brainwashed. I'm hoping he's found out and humiliated. Ha.
I should have included this link in the article. It tells a bit more about Peter. And I’ve drafted a book (~98k before final edits) about how he came to be what he is when he arrives in Hammil Valley. https://accargillauthor.substack.com/p/the-story-of-freelan-from-villain
Great writing! I liked how you handled the dialogue.
Thanks!
That’s what the WIP “The Journey of Peter Thorn” does. Poor guy is told lies for so long that seeing the truth is quite a shock.