When you send a spy, be sure he’s good at subterfuge
Peter seems pretty brainwashed. I'm hoping he's found out and humiliated. Ha.
I should have included this link in the article. It tells a bit more about Peter. And I’ve drafted a book (~98k before final edits) about how he came to be what he is when he arrives in Hammil Valley. https://accargillauthor.substack.com/p/the-story-of-freelan-from-villain
Great writing! I liked how you handled the dialogue.
Thanks!
Peter seems pretty brainwashed. I'm hoping he's found out and humiliated. Ha.
I should have included this link in the article. It tells a bit more about Peter. And I’ve drafted a book (~98k before final edits) about how he came to be what he is when he arrives in Hammil Valley. https://accargillauthor.substack.com/p/the-story-of-freelan-from-villain
Great writing! I liked how you handled the dialogue.
Thanks!