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Parker McCoy's avatar

Peter seems pretty brainwashed. I'm hoping he's found out and humiliated. Ha.

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A.C. Cargill, All-Human Author's avatar

I should have included this link in the article. It tells a bit more about Peter. And I’ve drafted a book (~98k before final edits) about how he came to be what he is when he arrives in Hammil Valley. https://accargillauthor.substack.com/p/the-story-of-freelan-from-villain

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Robert Garron's avatar

Great writing! I liked how you handled the dialogue.

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A.C. Cargill, All-Human Author's avatar

Thanks!

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