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Tony Dawson's avatar

Seriously, it's a great opening.

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Tony Dawson's avatar

This story sounds like a pyramid scheme, A.C. 😊

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A.C. Cargill, All-Human Author's avatar

Definitely! Har!

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Joseph L. Wiess's avatar

The Eyes of Amon-Ra, aka the Eyes of Cleopatra

lost by Admud-ra, felt the eyes were safer near his bed.

Took his case to a private dick.

"I start my work when I get paid," he said.

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A.C. Cargill, All-Human Author's avatar

Har! Good’un!

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